I was told to be a little more enthusiastic so i tried my best. I do find it a little weird to be enthusiastic about socks so it’s a little awkward. I changed my attitude towards it a little bit to come off as happier lol.
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Great elevator pitch Brynn! I think you did a great job this time around since you were noticeably more enthusiastic with your pitch. I also think your business idea is an interesting one that has potential. I think one of my only critiques would be that your elevator pitch was a little too short and could of probably benefited from being longer.
ReplyDeleteHey Brynn,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on your elevator pitch. I like how you got right to the point and clearly explained the problem you were trying to solve and how the problem affects you. I know from personal experience that no show socks can be really annoying when they slip off and I think many people would be potential customers for your product. One suggestion I have for you is to maybe add more content to your pitch and try to get it to around 1:30.
Hey Brynn,
ReplyDeleteI think you did an awesome job on this elevator pitch. Right away I was intrigued because you had a prop of the sock and you demonstrated how your product will work. I think that makes your audience much more likely to want to purchase it. I also liked how you were enthusiastic and even laughing at some points, it made it seem like you were very prepared. My only critique would be to try to add about 20 seconds more to your pitch just so you are better able to advertise your product.