https://youtu.be/5fx-NdZlrqk
Here is my presentation. I didn't receive any feedback but feel as if I have improved my flow of words in this video.
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30A Congrats everyone!
The moments that stick out to me the most are the posts that I had to video myself to unveil my product. It was nerve racking but put it in...
Great Elevator pitch Brynn! I can tell that you put in a lot of effort into your pitch and I think it’s a good idea, even though I don’t wear no show socks I know people who do wear them. I do have a few things that I think you can improve on: I think that you need some sort of hook to get peoples attention at the beginning of your pitch and you should try to be more enthusiastic next time around, but other than that keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Brynn! Overall, you had a great elevator pitch and I was very interested in what you had to say about no show socks as I was able to connect on a personal level. You were definitely dressed for the occasion and did not just sit in front of the computer. My only improvement is to change the end of your pitch. It ended a little abruptly so making a clever ending or something to get the audience thinking might make it more unforgettable!
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